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[禁忌之恋] 【被老公的两个伯伯轮奸】

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1楼 大 中 小 发表于 2009-5-11 22:36  显示全部帖子
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虽然一看就知道是杜撰出来的,但是我还是要说一声:"写的好!太好了!",都市女性,乡村情节,还有点乱伦,年轻的少妇被老伯XX,好一个反差的刺激.再加上以女性视角来表述,绝!呵呵,要是情节再复杂点再丰富些,心理描写还能再细微一些,那就完美了!最好能以女性视角多多突出,被强迫和期待被XX的激动心情, 事后对美好的滋味的回味.

[ 本帖最后由 caoking 于 2009-5-11 22:38 编辑 ]

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