nexus2022 发表于 2024-2-8 16:37   全显示 1楼
七匹狼有点出戏了哈。另外这几个角色感觉性格写的有点小崩，作者也提到了本文是黄金甲的同人，写皇室肉戏自然是反差感满满，但是缺了些沉稳，嗯就是感觉这些角色的言行匹配不上他们的身份，感觉把名字一换就是普通人家的母子文。一点小的建议，希望作者越写越好！
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